Its been a month since my last attempt at Haiku..so here's to the season and the "Spring" in my steps :)
Live Water
Bent, broken and fatally weak
I lay there dying, by the creek
I heard the thunder, then the rains
Water filled my lungs, then my veins
I stood again, shed all my blood
Wild and free, a furious flood
They screamed, they clutched,then drowned in me
I'm alive again, what i used to be.
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8 comments:
Very visual and filled with emotion...I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your words!
very metaphorical. nice job.
the quiet essence beneath the sturm and drang. Beautiful
And all is right... lovely work!
your words evoke a wild spirit of thought, reminding me of the quiet come to life in these days
a form of soulful metamorphisis...
I like it- "I'm alive again, what i used to be."
So true- the season of spring and all its renewal
A beautiful beginning! Lovely imagery.
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