The One Single Impression prompt this week : Fork in the road
Intertwined our fate would be
we split the heart from the beat
you walk away into the fading sun
i can barely move my feet.
we split the heart from the beat
you walk away into the fading sun
i can barely move my feet.
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9 comments:
Oh..this is cool-
Powerful little piece! Love it.
"split the heart from the beat". A beautiful line.
A real gem - very expressive!
I love the name of your blog ... and the subtitle.
I won't pretend to understand, but I like your take on the fork in the road.
Poignant and powerful. These words leave me feeling the strange and silent sorrow of standing alone. Wow. Thanks.
Wow! Talk about different directions!
Excellent poem- very powerful~
at least your feet are planted.
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